For wp2, I thought it went really well. I did a good job at changing my thesis I think (Thanks Andy) and at putting a lot of outside source quotes in my paper. I think it is much better than last wp
I think wp3 is going to be fun since we have been building up to this all quarter. I think I would like to kind of see an example of what you mean because it sounds like we are just rewording a scholarly piece? I just think I would understand better with an example.
I changed my thesis too and I think it really helped me right smoother. Also, I tried to have more quotes from outside sources too. WP3 doesn't look to bad since we've kinda learned everything we need to do it.
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